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The Grey Area

plightofpen:

One of the problems with writing is the fact that you know everything that your readers do not. You know where the protagonist is going to end up and how he/she is going to get there. You know why the antagonist acts the way he/she does and you know his/her weakness. 

But your readers don’t.

While you’re writing, it’s easy to leave out the nuances and quirks that give insight into everything you know about your character. Your antagonist is laden with a heavy burden of thought, but what if your readers just think he’s a cynical old man? Now I don’t mean that you should underestimate your readers. Trust me, if they’re reading your book, they’re smart. So you shouldn’t undersell your readers by putting in something obvious. Instead of saying “Paul was laden with a heavy burden of thought,” try “Paul’s back was arched, as if a great weight were perched upon his shoulders.” If you’ve done your job of developing the character correctly, the readers will have a small “Aha!” moment where they make the connection of physical description to personality trait. 

Once you’ve finished writing your novel, when the hellacious editing process rears its ugly head, go back and add a little foreshadowing here and there. Your readers will appreciate it when the book is over. It offers a glimpse into the characters’ minds, as well as yours, and your readers will find the book all the more meaningful.

P.S. Happy holidays, everyone! 

theparisreview:

The ten grumpiest authors in literary history—and a great shot of Vladimir Nabokov (via Flavorwire).
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theparisreview:

The ten grumpiest authors in literary history—and a great shot of Vladimir Nabokov (via Flavorwire).

For more of our morning’s roundup, click here.

NABOKOVED!

amandaonwriting:

Literary Birthday - 25 September 
Happy Birthday, William Faulkner, born 25 September 1897, died 6 July 1962
The Best 10 William Faulkner Quotes On Writing
The best fiction is far more true than any journalism.
If a story is in you, it has to come out.
Facts and truth really don’t have much to do with each other. 
In writing, you must kill all your darlings.
Always dream and shoot higher than you know you can do. Don’t bother just to be better than your contemporaries or predecessors. Try to be better than yourself.
The artist doesn’t have time to listen to the critics. The ones who want to be writers read the reviews, the ones who want to write don’t have the time to read reviews.
A writer needs three things, experience, observation, and imagination, any two of which, at times any one of which, can supply the lack of the others. 
The writer’s only responsibility is to his art. He will be completely ruthless if he is a good one. He has a dream. Everything goes by the board: honor, pride, decency, security, happiness, all, to get the book written. If a writer has to rob his mother, he will not hesitate; the Ode on a Grecian Urn is worth any number of old ladies. 
My own experience has been that the tools I need for my trade are paper, tobacco, food, and a little whisky. 
Read, read, read. Read everything— trash, classics, good and bad, and see how they do it. Just like a carpenter who works as an apprentice and studies the master. Read! You’ll absorb it. Then write. If it is good, you’ll find out. If it’s not, throw it out the window. 
William Faulkner was an American writer and Nobel Prize laureate. Faulkner is one of the most important writers of Southern literature in the United States. He was awarded the 1949 Nobel Prize in Literature. A Fable (1954) and his last novel The Reivers (1962), won the Pulitzer Prize for Fiction.
by Amanda Patterson

Love ya, Will. A Rose For Miss Emily is one of my favorites. :)

amandaonwriting:

Literary Birthday - 25 September 

Happy Birthday, William Faulkner, born 25 September 1897, died 6 July 1962

The Best 10 William Faulkner Quotes On Writing

  1. The best fiction is far more true than any journalism.
  2. If a story is in you, it has to come out.
  3. Facts and truth really don’t have much to do with each other. 
  4. In writing, you must kill all your darlings.
  5. Always dream and shoot higher than you know you can do. Don’t bother just to be better than your contemporaries or predecessors. Try to be better than yourself.
  6. The artist doesn’t have time to listen to the critics. The ones who want to be writers read the reviews, the ones who want to write don’t have the time to read reviews.
  7. A writer needs three things, experience, observation, and imagination, any two of which, at times any one of which, can supply the lack of the others. 
  8. The writer’s only responsibility is to his art. He will be completely ruthless if he is a good one. He has a dream. Everything goes by the board: honor, pride, decency, security, happiness, all, to get the book written. If a writer has to rob his mother, he will not hesitate; the Ode on a Grecian Urn is worth any number of old ladies. 
  9. My own experience has been that the tools I need for my trade are paper, tobacco, food, and a little whisky. 
  10. Read, read, read. Read everything— trash, classics, good and bad, and see how they do it. Just like a carpenter who works as an apprentice and studies the master. Read! You’ll absorb it. Then write. If it is good, you’ll find out. If it’s not, throw it out the window. 

William Faulkner was an American writer and Nobel Prize laureate. Faulkner is one of the most important writers of Southern literature in the United States. He was awarded the 1949 Nobel Prize in Literature. A Fable (1954) and his last novel The Reivers (1962), won the Pulitzer Prize for Fiction.

by Amanda Patterson

Love ya, Will. A Rose For Miss Emily is one of my favorites. :)

As a writer, you can have no traits more valuable to you than a fondness and respect for words and a yen to experiment with them.

— Reading Critically (via gallifreyanvascularsystem)

The most important things to remember about back story are that (a) everyone has a history and (b) most of it isn’t very interesting.

— Stephen King (via writersrelief)

How I imagine most editors/publishers will respond to my submission

whatshouldwecallpoets:

Polarity – It’s a Good Thing

tomavitabile:

In the laws of nature, everything happens because of polarity. At every level of existence, action is occurring, atoms are moving, molecules arranging because of a difference of polarity. An entity with less attractive forces being drawn to a more attractive force. Even electricity only flows from a point of lesser potential (-) to a greater potential (+). This difference of potential creates energy, and energy makes all things happen, on the atomic, magnetic, thermal, electrical, human behavioral, and literary level.

The greatest difference of potential in literature is that between good and evil. These diametrically opposed forces create the tension by which all the action happens. Think of a violin or guitar string: without tension, there is no sound, no music. Even soothing lullabies derive from tension.  In anything that’s ever written to be compelling or engaging, be it drama or comedy, it’s always about the potential between these ends of the human behavioral spectrum. Mankind has spent centuries debating: What is truly good and what is truly evil?

Thousands of famous and not so famous authors have wrestled with this question as well. In the end, each author settles (reluctantly or proactively) on the definition that works for them; they build their story world accordingly. They imbue bias and prejudice; they support or defend their characters, their story, against that standard – against their own internal standard. And then they release it to the rest of humanity, to their readers, hoping the audience finds resonance within.

So is a classic a classic because, irrespective of its time and culture, the societal norms and the language, the words the author composes spring from essential human truths? And, if you find those quintessential elements, have you written a classic? Have you created something that will endure?

For me (and you knew we were going here) the theory that works best is that good and evil are the range between selfish and selfless. The definition of a bad person, to me, is one who is selfish. It’s all about them. They steal, they kill, they take, they betray to further their own position. They’re full of greed, as well as the rest of the seven sins. It’s all about them. That, to me, is the ultimate bad and the essence of evil.

Conversely, on the other side of the potential, is the good. I see it as selfless. The actions the person is doing are not actions that they benefit from, but that others – the environment, the culture, or society – benefit from. That, to me, makes a hero. That, to me, makes someone with positive traits that are desirable and emulatable.

Back on the dark side… to me, the beauty of selfishness as a flawed character trait is that we all understand it, because selfishness resides in all of us. We may not have killed somebody or stolen anything, or betrayed confidences, but we’ve all been selfish. It then becomes a matter of degree. If your selfishness became large enough, would you kill another person to get what they have?

It’s a tantalizing proposition. Absurd to most, but the jails and the death rows are filled with people who answered that question in a manner differently than you. Was Hitler a selfish person? Was it all about him, regardless of who he killed? Is a war hero selfish? No matter how many enemies he killed?

It’s a slippery slope here, and it all comes down to intent. And the way I can walk away whistling, is if the intention and resulting action is selfless: good guy. If it’s selfish: bad guy.

End of story.

The pale organisms of literary heroes feeding under the author’s supervision swell gradually with the reader’s lifeblood; so that the genius of a writer consists in giving them the faculty to adapt themselves to that - not very appetizing - food and thrive on it, sometimes for centuries.

— Vladimir Nabokov (via writersrelief)